Effective Communication
11-12th Grade:
That
shows effective communication because I had to evaluate myself. I wrote this using the 6 basic traits of writing and made sure my grammar was good. I had Ms. Oberg read it and understand what i was trying to communicate, I am trying to communicate how I have changed and how I have grown to become a bigger and better person. I wrote for people trying to understand how students can change and how they can admit their faults and how they can change for the better. I wrote this also for the teacher to understand how she has helped he and how being in her class has changed my academics.
This
shows effective communication because it shows the 6 basic traits of writing and has good grammar. I communicated a topic that everyone could have a say on and already has a good opinion on. I'm communicating facts for everyone who reads this to understand what the point is coming across. This paper is for people interested in understand what happens when race and law enforcement come across each other. It was peer reviewed by my classmates and was given to the U of U writing teacher.